How does this sound???

As in, would you read it. Its about a girl named valerie, but theres a twist. Shes 115 years old and still looks twenty. Her lover, santiago redesigned human mortality. But the kept the immortal discovery a secret, only between the two of them. Or so she thought. But when santiago decides valeries time is up, his web of lies are laid bare and they are the only reason santiago has the advantage. But valerie has found love... is it enough? Of will she die protecting jason, a human whos stronger than santiago because of what he has... the binding love of and for an immortal.